Question

以“Teenagers Should Form a Good Habit”为题，写一篇120个词左右的短文。要求言之有理，内容连贯。
要点提示；
1. 我们要养成一个什么好习惯；
2. 为什么要养成这个好习惯；
3. 我们如何养成这个好习惯。

Answer 1

不唯一
Just as a saying goes, sow a thought, reap an action; sow an action, reap a habit; sow a habit, reap a character; sow a character, reap a destiny. Apparently, it’s significant that teenagers should form many good habits, among which the most important one in my view is to get up early.
Getting up early is beneficial to teenagers’ physical, mental and emotional development. For one thing, it can’t be denied that the fresh air in the morning does good to our health. Thus, doing sports at this time is a fine choice. For another, morning is the best time for us to memorize quickly and easily after a good rest at night. Furthermore, it can shape your character, for it needs perseverance for us to get up early, especially in the winter morning.
To get up early, you’d better go to bed early and set yourself an alarm in case you might oversleep. Once you’ve formed the good habit, getting up early will become part of your daily routines naturally.

解析试题分析：考生应理解写作要求和写作目的，注意时态和人称，尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：首先，看清答题要求，尤其是“写作要求”后的具体要求，并在答题中一直自始至终贯彻其要求。应避免句式过于单一呆板，应该有长有短、错落有致；有抑有扬，使文章有很强的节奏感，这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。例如强调句、倒装句、with复合结构、非谓语动词、恰到好处的被动句、高级的定语从句、what引导的主语从句等。