Question

【题目】请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My classmate Angel is the lovely and bright girl. She is popular with us. One day, news came whether Angel had got blood cancer. They really shocked everybody. All of the classmate and teachers got involved in raising money.

Some have called the media for help. In the end, we succeeded by raising the money for her first operation. Many people offered as much help as they can even though they did not know Angel. I was really touching by this. There is love nowhere as long as we seek for it. We will keep try until Angel cured.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the→a

【2】whether→ that

【3】They→ It

【4】classmate→classmates

【5】by→in

【6】can→could

【7】touching→touched

【8】nowhere→everywhere

【9】try→trying

【10】加is

【解析】

试题分析：Angel是一个受大家欢迎的女孩子，但是她被诊断为血癌，大家都向她伸出援手。我明白了，这个世界处处都有爱。

【1】the→a 考查冠词。 Angel是一个可爱聪明的女孩子，表示一个，所以用a。

【2】whether→ that 考查关系词。从句不缺成分，用that连接 ，所以用 that。

【3】They→ It 考查代词。It指代前文的news，这个新闻使我们震惊，故用 It。

【4】classmate→classmates考查名词。All 表示全部，classmate同学，为可数名词，用复数，故用classmates

【5】by→in 考查介词。Success in doing sth成功做某事，用 in。

【6】can→could 考查情态动词。全文使用的是过去时态，故用could。

【7】touching→touched 考查形容词。Be touched，受感动，用touched。

【8】nowhere→everywhere 考查副词。只要我们用心寻找，哪里都有爱，是处处有爱，所以用everywhere。

【9】try→trying 考查动词。Keep doing sth，继续做某事，用 trying。

【10】加is 考查动词。主语Angel与动词cure之间是被动关系，被治愈，加is。