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【题目】以“我最喜爱的音乐形式”为题目写一篇英语作文，内容包括：喜欢的音乐类型，喜欢该音乐的原因，音乐在生活中扮演的角色。100词左右

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There are many kinds of music ,such as country music, R&B , rock music,classical music and so on. My favorite music is pop music. On the one hand, it is easy to learn, and this knid of music is often about our life, for example, A whole new world, Memory, Country Road and so on. On the other hand,they are very popular among people and they are very interesting and easy to learn. It is also a good way to learn English.

Since I was 12 years old,when I played computer , I always opened the music player to listen pop music.When I listening these pop music . I will feel very realx . So that's way I love pop music best.

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试题分析：以“我最喜爱的音乐形式”为题目写一篇英语作文，内容包括：喜欢的音乐类型，喜欢该音乐的原因，音乐在生活中扮演的角色。100词左右. 写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。避免全部使用简单句。

【亮点说明】On the one hand, it is easy to learn, and this knid of music is often about our life在句中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式；On the one hand,…On the other hand句式的巧妙使用，恰到好处，很有章法；It is also a good way to learn English. 在句中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式；Since I was 12 years old,when I played computer , I always opened the music player to listen pop music.这句话中Since引导时间状语从句，和when引导的定语从句完美结合；When I listening these pop music . I will feel very realx .句中运用了时间状语从句；So that's way I love pop music best.句中使用了定语从句。