分析 本文主要讲述作者学校每年举行夏令营活动,这让作者可以从繁忙的学习中休息下.去年,作者去了农场,感受了那里的简单生活,亲近了大自然,欣赏了乡村美景.作者期待着今年的夏令营.
解答 Every year,my school organize a summer camp activity.I love to join the activity because I can have a lot of funs with my friends.What's more,I can take a break from my study time and enjoy my moment.Last year,we went to a country farm and experience the life there.I was so impressing by the simple lifestyle.We woke up early and then walked on the country road,what was so quiet but the air was so fresh.I felt really peacefully in my heart.Though the life there was simple,but I liked it.I was so close∧nature and could appreciate it beauty.I am so looking forward to the summer camp activity this year.I want to experience different things.
详解:
1.organize改为organizes 根据时间状语Every year,要用一般现在时.
2.funs改为fun 考查名词.fun是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
3.experience改为experienced 根据时间状语Last year,要用一般过去时.
4.impressing改为impressed 考查动词时态.I与impress之间是动宾关系,要用一般过去时的被动语态.
5.what改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词the country road在从句中作主语,用关系代词which.
6.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是并列关系而非转折关系,用连词and.
7.peacefully改为peaceful 考查形容词.feel是连系动词,后接形容词作表语.
8.去掉but 考查连词.在英语中,两个分句要用连词连接,在已经有although连接句子的情况下,but是多余的,要去掉.
9.加to be close to意为"与…近; 与…亲近",是固定搭配.
10.it改为its 考查代词.beauty是名词,其前用形容词性物主代词修饰作定语.
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