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5．假设你叫李华，是校学生会主席．学生会决定于2017年9月16日～22日举办第三届艺术周，请你根据以下内容写一份书面通知．
★参赛方式：以班级为单位
★活动内容：书法，绘画，歌舞，乐器表演等
★评奖方式：由专家和学生组成评奖小组，根据班级总分，评出前六名；作为奖励，前两名将有机会代表学校参加省中学生艺术节
★报名时间：本周五之前
★如有疑问，请联系学生会
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
3．参考词汇：第三届艺术周the Third Arts Week；省中学生艺术节the Provincial Arts Festival；书法 calligraphy； 乐器musical instruments；专家expert；短剧short plays．
NOTICE
To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）It will last seven days，from September 16th to 22nd，2017．
Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）The judges will be made up of experts and students．Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes．We'll choose the first six classes as the winners．As a reward，the first two top winners will have the chance to attend the Provincial Arts Festival．
Each class is expected to take an active part and sign up for it before Friday．And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）For more information，please contact the Students'Union．We'll be more than glad to offer help to you．
The Students'Union．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你叫李华，是校学生会主席．学生会决定于2017年9月16日～22日举办第三届艺术周，请你根据以下内容写一份书面通知，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：参赛方式：以班级为单位
★活动内容：书法，绘画，歌舞，乐器表演等
★评奖方式：由专家和学生组成评奖小组，根据班级总分，评出前六名；作为奖励，前两名将有机会代表学校参加省中学生艺术节
★报名时间：本周五之前
★如有疑问，请联系学生会
  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：a wide range of activities各种各样的活动；including包括；as well as也，和；be made up of由…组成；take an active part积极参加；
   To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）
And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）

解答 NOTICE
      To make our school life colorful，we have decided to hold the Third Arts Week in the lecture hall．（高分句型一）It will last seven days，from September 16th to 22nd，2017．
      Our Arts Week will cover a wide range of activities，including calligraphy，drawing，short plays，playing musical instruments，as well as singing and dancing．（高分句型二）The judges will be made up of experts and students．Prizes will be given according to the total scores of the classes．We'll choose the first six classes as the winners．As a reward，the first two top winners will have the chance to attend the Provincial Arts Festival．
       Each class is expected to take an active part and sign up for it before Friday．And it is hoped that all of the students will make good preparations and take the chance to show your talent．（高分句型三）For more information，please contact the Students'Union．We'll be more than glad to offer help to you．
                                                                                                                                                                                    The Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．