Question

短文改错
This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very
crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy
in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be
sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with
the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.
Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This
uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have
heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

Answer 1

小题1:去掉a
小题2:Besides改为Beside
小题3:held改为holding
小题4:occupies改为occupied
小题5:curious改为curiously
小题6:if改为that或者去掉if
小题7:her改为my
小题8:must后面加be
小题9:word改为words
小题10:for改为to

试题分析：
小题1:去掉a  固定搭配by bus坐公交车。
小题2:Besides改为Beside 这里的beside是介词“在…旁边”；在我的旁边是一个抱着孩子的妇女。
小题3:held改为holding 本句指的动词hold与前面的名词a woman构成主动关系，故使用现在分词短语在句中作定语修饰名词a woman，指抱着孩子的那个妇女。
小题4:occupies改为occupied 本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，故使用一般过去时occupied。
小题5:curious改为curiously  只有副词curiously修饰动词asking his mother好奇地问她的妈妈。
小题6:if改为that或者去掉if 动词think后面的宾语从句可以用that修饰，that在句中不充当任何成分，可以省略。
小题7:her改为my 根据句意：超出我的预料，是指我没有预料到，而不是她。
小题8:must后面加be 本句使用的是“must+动词原形”对现在的情况进行的推测，must be tired一定很累了。
小题9:word改为words 用复数形式words表示所说的话。
小题10:for改为to 固定搭配offer sth to sb 向某人提供某物。
点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。