Question

假设你是李华，你的加拿大朋友David给你发来email,希望你给他简要介绍中国过春节的一些文化习俗。
内容包括：贴春联,包饺子,看春晚,拜年,放鞭炮,走亲访友等.
注意：1. 词数100词左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已写好,不计入总数. 生词: 春联----Spring Festival couplets
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email.____________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m very glad to receive your email. I’m willing to tell you about how we Chinese celebrate the Spring Festival. The day just before the lunar New Year, every family will paste the Spring Festival couplets on the door and make preparations for making dumplings. On New Year’s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala. When the New Year bell rings, all the people will cheer and firecrakers are set off. With the New Year’s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Year's call each other. Everywhere is filled with joy.  
Could you please drop me a line talking about how westerners celebrate the New Year?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文，写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文涵盖了所有的要点，语言简洁，但是不乏好的词组和句式：make preparations for 准备，set off 燃放，be filled with充满， drop me a line给某人写信，On New Year’s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala. 这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语， With the New Year’s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Year's call each other. 这句话用了with复合结构。