Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

I’m writing to offer some advices on our winter travel. In my opinion, a one-week trip to a countryside can’t be good. The fresh air and various activities will guarantee us a healthy life here.

We may go by bike to enjoy the landscape. During the trip, we can arrange some activities, from what we will benefit a lot, such as playing snowballs, building a snowman, going skating and climb a mountain. We can even invite the local students join us, not only to improve their English but also to deepen their understanding of the countryside. I am confident to establish friendship and harvest happy from this trip.

I would appreciate it that if you could take my plan into consideration.

Answer 1

【答案】1. advice

2. a－the

3. good－better

4. here－there

5. what－which

6. climbing

7. to join

8. their－our

9. happiness

10. 去 that

【解析】本文对冬季旅行提供了一些建议。

1.考查不可数名词。advice（建议），是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把advices改成advice。

2.考查固定用法。the countryside农村，故把a－the。

3.考查形容词的比较级的用法。根据下句The fresh air and various activities will guarantee us a healthy life here.可知，“以我看来，一个星期的乡村之旅再好不过了。”否定词not/never等和比较级搭配表示最高级的意思。故把good－better。