Question

1．下面的图表显示了某校高三学生周末放假的学习生活情况．
Ways to spend the weekend 
 
根据上图信息，请以"Ways to spend the weekend"为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文． 要求如下：
1．简要描述图中的信息；
2．说明原因 （为了高效学习；锻炼身体；争分夺秒…）；
3．谈谈你的看法．
注意：文章标题和开头已给出（不计词数）
Ways to spend the weekend
 
     As can be seen from the chart，                                                   
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do（1），while（2）25% students choose to study at school during weekends．大多数学生回家休息，而25%的学生选择周末在学校学习．
（1）该部分是be动词后what 引导的表语从句，书面表达中选择从句是常见的高分句型．
（2）while表示"可是，然而"，用来表示前后之间的对比和转折．
句型二：
The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends．最少数量的学生（约占15%）周末参与户外运动；
account for 占据比例；本句中是现在分词短语做后置定语，书面表达中运用分词做定语或状语总是吸引眼球的高分句式．
句型三：
Only by（1）combining a good  rest with（2）proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life．只有把休息和锻炼结合起来高三学生才能期待成功的学校生活．
（1）"only+状语"放在句首，句子用部分倒装的语序，增强了语言的气势，情感色彩强烈．
（2）combine…with把…与…结合．

解答 Ways to Spend the Weekend
  As can be seen from the chart，senior three students have different ways to spend their weekends．Going back home and having a good rest is what most students would like to do，while 25% students choose to study at school during weekends【句型一】．The fewest students，accounting for 15%，take outdoor activities to spend their weekends【句型二】（描述图表信息）．
  Various reasons are responsible for their different choices．Those who choose to go back home believe that a good rest does help them relax and work more efficiently during the school time．Outdoor-activity lovers hold the opinion that taking exercise is a wonderful way to refresh themselves．However，a small number of students living far away from home tend to stay at school to save every minute to study（分析不同原因）．
  Personally，despite the heavy study pressure，senior three year doesn't necessarily mean studying all the time．Only by combining a good  rest and proper exercise can senior three students expect a successful academic life【句型三】（个人看法和建议）．

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点，要点要包括文字中的要点，也要包括图片或表格中的主要信息．其次要考虑词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．