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第二节：书面表达（共25分）
情景作文（共1 小题，25分）
最近你们班的同学对去年合肥市中小学生发生交通事故及其原因作了一次调查。他们分析了其造成事故的原因并提出了一些建议。

原   因	司机： 司机开车精力不集中，驾车时打手机 超速行驶(drive over the speed limit) 酒后驾车
	学生： 乘坐摩的(by motorcycle)上学 在机动车车道（lane/roadway）上骑自行车 不走地下通道(take underground tunnels)，横穿马路 边走边看书、听音乐
建   议	交通部门（the Traffic Department）强调司机的交通安全意识，加大处罚违章司机的力度。 学校加强学生安全教育，让他们珍爱生命。

请根据以上内容用英语写一篇短文，报告你们班的调查结果(开头已给出)。字数，120字左右。
Recently our classmates did a survey about the traffic accident to pupils and middle school students and its causes. The results are as follows.
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Answer 1

Recently our classmates did a survey about the traffic accident to pupils and middle school students and its causes. The results are as follows.
There is no denying that both drivers and students should bear responsibilities. On one hand, drivers can not concentrate their mind and make a phone call when driving. Some drivers even drive over the speed limit and ignore the passers-by’s existence. What’s worse, some drive after drinking, which is one of the main causes of the traffic accident. On the other hand, the students are lacking in safety consciousness. They often do something that disobey traffic rules, such as going to school. by motorcycle, riding on roadways/ lanes, walking across streets rather than taking underground tunnels, and reading and listening to music while walking. Unfortunately, all of these aspects result in the terrible accident, which do great harm to both families.
Personally, I think the Traffic Department should attach the importance of safety consciousness to the drivers. Meanwhile, some drivers who violate the traffic law should be punished seriously. As for young students, teachers and parents should strengthen children’s safety education and teach them how to protect themselves and value their lives.

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