Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学(University of Virginia)计算机专业深造，请根据以下提示用英语写一封入学申请：

1．性别，年龄，毕业学校；   2．学习情况及特长；

3．申请入学的理由；        4．联系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com

注意：1．词数：120～150；       2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

                                                                               

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam.

I’m writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university.

First, please allow me to briefly introduce myself. My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June. I’m an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects, in particular Internet, Technology and English. This is the reason why I want to major in Computer Science in an English speaking country. I’m also good at computer program design and basketball.

I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoy a good reputation all around the world. It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

My e-mail address is lihua93@ yahoo. com, and I’ll appreciate it very much if I can receive your reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文写作首先对自己的姓名，出生，毕业学校等相关的信息进行介绍My name is Li Hua, born in 1993. I’ll graduate from Xinhua High School this coming June.然后对学习情况及特长进行说明，可以说自己是一个全面发展的学生all-round student，特别是在计算机，英语方面成绩很优秀in particular Internet ,Technology and English.再对申请入学的理由进行阐述，可以将自己的特长和申请入学的理由结合起来写，运用This is the reason why的句型来自然的过度。最后适当赞美一下这所大学，有助于给别人留下好的印象，表达自己对这所大学的向往It would be a great honor for me to study at your university.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文难度不大，写介绍信的文章一般都不难，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于细节的描写，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。