Question

1）在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.
For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. Otherwise, he will lose himself in his own way of life.
Belief is so important that it can change one's fate. As a deaf man, Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music. Marie Curie, a famous scientist, also has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard. At last they saw the dim blue light of new element -radium,
which made her dream come true.
From my personal point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely to get successful and master his own life.

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch.这句话用了定语从句， For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." 这句话用了非限制性定语从句，Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life.这句话有定语从句， Belief is so important that it can change one's fate. 这句话用了so…that…句型，As a deaf man, Beethoven went on working with his strong belief in the last year of his life, though he was not able to hear his own fine music. 这句话用了让步状语从句， In order to improve her discovery, Marie and her husband worked hard.这句话用了不定式做目的状语， At last they saw the dim blue light of new element -radium, which made her dream come true.这句话用了非限制性定语从句， it can be seen that one with firmly-held belief is likely toget successful and master his own life. 这句话用了it做形式主语的句型，还有文章还使用了From my personal point of view,  Otherwise,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。