分析 本文主要讲述作者下周没有时间参观杭州,因为一要为即将到来的英语考试作准备,二要参加一个募捐晚会.因此要推迟参观时间,为此而感到抱歉.
解答 Dear Jerry,
I'm sorry for having no time to pay∧visit to Hangzhou with you next week.The reason why I can't spare time is because there are many friend of mine who are facing a coming English exam.There has no doubt that it is important for them.They are looking forward on to my giving a hand to them and they hope to get through the exam successful.As a result,I will spend time help them at that time.In addition,I will attend a party which aim to raise money for the people in the earthquake-hit area.Butl want to put off their time of the visit to the first weekend of next month.Is it OK?
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua.
1.加a 考查冠词.pay a visit to意为"去参观,拜访",是固定搭配.
2.because改为that 考查连词.the reason后接表语从句时,连词用that不用because.
3.friend改为friends 考查名词.friend是可数名词,其前有many修饰时,要用复数形式friends.
4.has改为is 考查固定搭配.there be意为"有",不可与表示"有"之意的have连用,且主语doubt是不可数名词,be用is.
5.去掉on 考查介词.look forward to意为"期望,盼望",是固定搭配.
6.successful改为successfully 考查副词.get through是动词短语,要用副词修饰,形容词successful的副词是successfully.
7.help改为helping 考查动名词.spend time/money (in) doing sth.花费时间(金钱)做某事.
8.aim改为aims 考查动词时态.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词party指物,关系代词which是单数三人称,谓语动词也要用单数三人称形式aims.
9.But改为So 考查连词.根据句意,前后两个单句表示因果关系,并不是转折关系.
10.their改为our 考查代词.根据句意,应是推迟"我们的"的时间.
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