Question

13．假如你是李华，在英语课上，老师要求你就你喜欢的一句格言用英语谈谈自己的体会．请写一篇发言稿．
1．从以下格言中选出你喜欢的一句，并解释它的基本含义．
It is never too late to learn．
Constant dropping wears the stone．
A rainbow comes after rain．
2．举例谈谈自己的感想．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Hello，everyone，today I'd like to talk about a motto I like best called                              ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，就你喜欢的一句格言用英语谈谈自己的体会．请写一篇发言稿，可以任选一个格言进行写作．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
As you may see，only after experiencing frustration，pains and sufferings in life can you really grow up well and mature physically and mentally and eventually achieve you goals．（高分句型一）本句运用as引导的非限制性定语从句，并且only+状语，句子使用了倒装
Then in came my head teacher，who encouraged me and motivated me to study hard，convincing me that a rainbow only comes after rain and sunshine is just ahead of you．（高分句型二）本句then 置于句首，使用了全倒装，句中还使用了who引导的非限制性定语从句

解答 Hello，everybody，today I'd like to talk about a motto I like best called"A rainbow comes  after rain"．
    As you may see，only after experiencing frustration，pains and sufferings in life can you really grow up well and mature physically and mentally and eventually achieve you goals．（高分句型一）And this is what the motto really means．
    Once I was among the top students in my class，but later I suffered a serious disease，which almost cost me my life．Luckily，I survived．But I fell behind my fellow classmates due to missing too many lessons．So I was in desperate despair．Then in came my head teacher，who encouraged me and motivated me to study hard，convincing me that a rainbow only comes after rain and sunshine is just ahead of you．（高分句型二） And now with great efforts I finally top the students in class．
    Thank you for your listening．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．