Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In my view, the Internet is helpful. It is known to all, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Beside, our ability to operate the computer can be improved great.     

     So we should not be addicted to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harmful website. Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet from becoming our friend.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 It→as

 a→an

 在“home”前加“at或from”

 got→get

 去掉to

 Beside→Besides

 great→greatly

 So→But

 destroying→destroyed

 website→websites

【解析】

试题分析：短文讲述了因特网在我们日常生活中所发挥的重要作用。

 It→as。As is known to all, the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life=It is known to all that the Internet is playing a important part in our daily life.

 a→an。important是以元音音素开头的词，故用“an”。

 在“home”前加“at或from”。表示“来自国内外的消息”要用“news from/at home and abroad”

 got→get。与“read”是并列的谓语，故用原形“get”

 去掉to。“attend”是及物动词，直接跟宾语。

 Beside→Besides。这里不是指“在旁边”而是指“而且，除了还有”的意思。

 great→greatly。修饰动词“improved”应该用副词形式“greatly”。

 So→But。上下文是转折关系，不是因果关系。

 destroying→destroyed。“get+宾语+done(过去分词作宾语补足语)”的结构。指“遭到了了破坏”

 website→websites。“有害的网站应该不是一家”，所以要用复数形式。

考点：短文改错