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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer holiday, I paid visit to Hong Kong with my father. To their surprise, we found the streets were not as wide as those in our city. The bus and cars were running very fast. The sidewalks were always crowding because many visitors went there every day. The people there were friendly, and when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us. We take many photos there and then we shared them on WeChat Moments（朋友圈）. We also bought some gifts there for much things were sold for a discount. It’s so hardly to say goodbye to Hong Kong. We hope to go there once more unless we have chances.

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【解析】本文为记叙文。叙述了作者与爸爸一起去香港去旅游的经历。

1.考查固定搭配。去年暑假我和爸爸一起去了香港。pay a visit to …为固定搭配，意为“去某地参观、旅游，拜访某人”，因此在在paid后添加a 。

2.考查人称代词的一致性。我们惊讶的是，我们发现那儿的街道不像我们城市的街道那么宽。根据文章可知，是我们去旅游，所以是我们很惊讶，故把their改为our。

3.考查名词复数。根据后面的“cars were running very fast”可知，街上的公交车和轿车很多，所以要用复数。因此把.bus改为buses 。

4.考查形容词。人行道总是拥挤不堪，因为每天都有许多游客去那里。crowding为名词“拥挤，聚集”， 而本句中要用形容词，因此crowded“拥挤的,塞满的”符合题意，crowding改为crowded

5.考查谓语动词的语态。那里的人很友好，当我们请他们帮助时，他们愿意帮助我们。分析句子when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us，本句中的we与谓语动词ask for 是主动关系而非被动关系，因此要把were多余，可删除were

6.考查谓语动词的时态。分析文章可知，本文讲述的是过去的事，所以以过去时为主，故把take改为took 。

7.考查形容词。根据后面的“much things”可知，things为可数名词的复数，而much只能修饰不可数名词，修饰可数名词复数要用many修饰。所以把much改为many 。

8.考查固定搭配。很多东西都是打折出售的。at a discount of….为固定搭配，意为“按…的折扣”，所以把for改为at

9.考查形容词。和香港告别真是太难了。Hardly为“几乎不”，而“hard”意为“难的，硬的”。因此 hardly改为hard

10.考查连词。如果有机会我们希望再去一次。unless意为“除非…”,而句中要用如果，即连词“if”，故把 unless改为if.