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Ending: It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones in school.

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         Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cell phones, which puzzled you.

         There is no doubt that cell phones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever we are. Besides, the cell phone is a way to have fun.

         However, there are some problems with using cell phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that using cell phones frequently does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cell phones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.

         As a student, you should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cell phones.