Question

书面表达 （满分30分）
高三的学生大部分都将步入18周岁，学校组织了成人仪式。你校高三年级拟举行一次有关“成人”的英文演讲比赛。请根据以下要点写一篇100--120词的演讲稿。
要点：1．步入成人的心情；
2．成人仪式对你的意义；
3．如何用实际行动表达自己的长大成人。
注意：1． 可对所给要点作适当发挥；
2．演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校以及本人姓名；
开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to share my excited feelings of being grown-up with you today．
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor to have the opportunity to share my excited feelings of being grown-up with you today． As I stand here, words can not begin to describe what I feel． For today is a significant turning point in my eighteen years of life, a day that seems likes any other on the outside, but which marks the threshold of adulthood． Today, I am officially grown up．
Attending the formal adulthood ceremony held by our school has opened our eyes to what being grown-up really entails and what the role of a citizen in society requires of us．
Bearing in mind a sense of responsibility is the first step I will take towards the goal． Every time somebody lends out a hand, I’ll accept it with gratitude and pay it back by helping those in need． My steps may be humble, but it is they that make the wag．
This is my declaration towards adulthood． Thank you for listening．

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