Question

19．假如你叫李华，在陆良二中读书，在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助，请班级的英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语．下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：

学习英语时遇到的问题	1．生词多，记忆有难度2…
请英语老师提出的建议	1．介绍一些学习英语的好方法2…

字数：100左右．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear teacher，
My name is Li Hua．I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help．
                ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲类作文，话题是关于自己在学习英语时所遇见的困难向老师说明并求助．文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生需要翻译成英语．灵活变化表达，适度进行改写．在写作的时候使用高级的词汇和各种句型，让文章充满变化．在发表个人观点的时候，尽量使用谚语来提高文章的档次．What's more而且；
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语：have difficulty in doing 做某事有困难；so that因此；In the meanwhile，与此同时；make great progress取得进步；with your help在你的帮助下；First，I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember．这个句子运用到that引导定语从句；Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for some help．这个句子faced 是非谓语动词；

解答 Dear teacher，
     My name is Li Hua．I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some help．I have met many difficulties in learning English．First，I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember（高分句型）．Besides，the texts are too long for me to recite．What's more，grammar is also very difficult to learn．（高分句型）
     Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for some help．（高分句型）Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？In the meanwhile，I advise you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you．（高分句型）Also，I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar．I'm sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help．I would be grateful to you if you can give me some good suggestions．（高分句型）Thank you!
Yours
LiHua

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．