假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city for so a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．After divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the ear th back and push them down hard．We continued d oing that until all the work was done．Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．

分析本文讲述了自己一次劳动经历．
在一个秋日的午后，我们被派往农场种土豆，在城市里呆了那么久，我们很高兴来到乡下，在被分成三个小组以后，我们开始干活，有挖坑的，种土豆的，埋土的．我们一直干到天黑，虽然很累但是很满足．

解答 Time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school．In the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities．What impressed me best was an activity called"Learning to Farm"．In an autumn afternoon，we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes．Having been in the city forso a long time，we were so happy to go to the countryside．After divided into three groups，we started to work．Some students cut potatoes into pieces； some dug holes，and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole，put the ear th back and push them down hard．We continued d oing that until all the work was done．Although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home．
解析：
1．a改为the．考查冠词．表示第三年，前面用定冠词the．
2．had 改为has．考查谓语动词的时态．本句表示自过去某一时刻到说话时这段时间中的经历，用现在完成时，所以had 改为has．
3．best 改为most．考查最高级．这里表示给我印象最深的活动是，修饰动词impressed，所以best 改为most．
4．In改为On．考查介词．表示在一个秋天的下午，应该用on an autumn afternoon．
5．which改为where；或在which前面加on．考查定语从句的关系词．这是一个修饰先行词a farm的定语从句，且关系词在从句中作地点状语，所以which改为where或前面加on．
6．so改为such．考查单词辨析．such后跟名词，so修饰形容词和副词，本句修饰名词a long time，所以so 改为such．
7．divided 改为being divided．考查非谓语动词．介词After后用现在分词做宾语，又因为"我们"和"分成三组"是被动关系，故用现在分词的被动式．
8．hole改为holes．考查名词．根据the pieces of potatoes，所以hole用复数．
9．them改为it．考查代词的一致关系．这里代指不可数名词the earth，所以them改为it．
10．去掉but．考查连词．Although与but不能连用，所以去掉but．

点评考查短文改错．
现在分词的被动（形）式：being+过去分词（done）
意义：表示其逻辑主语（被修饰的名词等）为现在分词动作的承受者．
例句1：The building being built is our library．
翻译：正在建的那栋楼是我们的图书馆．
分析：being built 作名词building的定语．
例句2：The question being discussed is of great importance．
翻译：正在讨论的这个问题非常重要．
分析：being discussed 作名词question的定语．

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