Question

18．该文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起） 不计分．
  Yesterday morning，it was already 7：30 that I got up．Thinking I would be late，I got dressing quickly and left without breakfast．There were such many people at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus．So I rush towards my schoo l．Suddenly，I ran across an old woman and she fell down．Without make a n apology，I left him and went on．Later，I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and she was sent to hospital．I felt it very sorry．And the following day I paid her visit．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者起床迟了，赶不上公共汽车，只好冲向学校．突然，撞倒了一位老太太，没有道歉便离开了．后来，听说老太太腿伤得很重，被送到了医院，第二天便去登门拜访．

解答 Yesterday morning，it was already 7：30 that I got up．Thinking I would be late，I got dressing quickly and left without breakfast．There were such many people at the bus stop that it was hard to catch a bus．So I rush towards my schoo l．Suddenly，I ran across an old woman and she fell down．Without make an apology，I left him and went on．Later，I heard the old woman was bad injured in the leg and she was sent to hospital．I felt it very sorry．And the following day I paid her∧visit．
详解：
1．that改为when 考查连词．根据句意：当我起床时已是7：30了．分析句子结构，此处应是由when引导的时间状语从句，而非强调句．
2．dressing改为dressed 考查过去分词．get dressed意为"穿衣服"，是固定搭配．
3．such改为so 考查词语用法．当名词前面有many，much，few，little等表示数量多少的限定词时，应该用so，而不能用such．
4．rush改为rushed 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
5．across改为into 考查词语用法．run across意为"偶然发现"，run into意为"（使）碰撞"，此处应是：（使）碰撞．
6．make改为making 考查动名词．without是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
7．him改为her 考查代词．her指代上文提到的an old woman．
8．bad改为badly 考查副词．injured是形容词，要用副词修饰．
9．去掉it 考查代词．feel此处是连系动词，后接形容词sorry作表语，it是多余的，要去掉．
10．加to 考查固定搭配．pay sb．a visit意为"登门拜访"，是固定搭配．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．