Question

2．假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华．你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语．你希望参加此活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
●对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．

Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是书信类作文，根据所给要点内容给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语．属于提纲作文．时态为一般现在时．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（对活动的认识）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（个人优势）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（计划）
Yours sincerely，
 Li Hua

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，并充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．