Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系，修复友情，特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件：

1．礼物选择：

2．你的理由；

3．其它和解建议。

注意：

1．词数100左右：

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3．开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．

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Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.

Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文属于半开放性作文，写一篇电子邮件。写作时应注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确写作主要内容是什么；本文写作时可根据提示从三个方面来写，即邮件的主要内容应包括：选择什么礼物；其理由是什么；给出其它和解建议。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子时态、语态；就本文而言，应该用一般现在时，人称应以第二和第一人称为主。3、注意在写作时使用较高级的词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。