Question

下图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。

要点提示：描述漫画内容；结合实际，简述自己的理解与启发。
注意：1.陈述所给要点，可适度发挥。
　　2. 词数150 左右。
　　3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Answer 1

As is described in the picture, a person was persuaded into a smalll cage, who was told he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way. Additionally, the cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns.
According to my understanding, the picture describes a person with some mental disability, as a result of which, he prefers to stay in large spaces with other’s company. However, the doctor is trying all his out to help the person, supposing that it’s more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them. Instead of offering him medicine, the doctor has his unique way of treating this patient, pushing him to face his problems directly.
From my perspective, life is filled with ups and downs. It goes beyond doubt that under no circumstances should we avoid challenges or responsibility. Quite the contray, we are supposed to face them with courage and wisdom.

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇图画类写作。这类题一般要求考生仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文。实际上，图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写。第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以)，第二段分析原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二、三段应该是写作的重点。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如persuade into，cure of，according to，as a result of, prefer to，by means of，instead of， be filled with， be supposed to；还运用句型as及which引导的非限定性定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：additionally，however，or 等等。