Question

【题目】请仔细观察下面的图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述图表中的现象；

2.造成这一现象的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法（原因不少于两点）；

3.提出你对这一问题的解决方法。

【写作要求】

1.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2.不必写标题；

3.参考词汇：obesity rate 肥胖率 malnutrition rate 营养不良率 school-age children 学龄儿童

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】The chart shows that family income greatly affects the health problems of school-age children. With the family income increasing, their malnutrition rate has been falling, while the obesity rate rising.

There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon. On the one hand, parents with higher income spoil their children to such a degree that they tend to provide their children with delicious fatty food, but ignore the importance of their balanced diets. On the other hand, parents with lower income cannot afford expensive nutritious food due to their economic squeeze, which leads to their children’s malnutrition.

As for the solutions to this phenomenon, parents of high-income families should increase their awareness of the severe problem with obesity and help their children develop healthy eating habits. Meanwhile, parents of low-income families should and must try every means to improve the quality of their children’s diets, which help them grow healthily.

【解析】本文属于图表类作文，以第三人称为主，时态主要是一般现在时。

我们可以根据提示将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。文章语言简练，结构严谨，覆盖所有要点。