Question

【题目】为了使我们的校园更美好。作为学生会主席的你，向全校学生倡议要形成环保意识，让同学们明白保护环境是我们中学生应尽的责任。请根据下面内容写一份倡议书，要点如下：

1. 节电、节水；

2. 采用公共交通方式；

3. 不乱扔垃圾，拒绝使用一次性筷子及塑料袋，支持“光盘行动”。

注意：

1. 次数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：一次性筷子once-off chopsticks ; 光盘行动 “clear your plate” campaign

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Thank you!

Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

Do you want to live in a beautiful school? If so, we should bear the following in mind.

To begin with, we should turn off the lights and the taps when we don’t use them. Also, we should use public transportation instead of cars and taxis. In addition, don’t throw rubbish around and remember to refuse to use once-off chopsticks and plastic bags. Last but not least, we should be totally for the “clear your plate” campaign. Only in these ways can we make our schoolyard more beautiful.

Let’s take action and make some contributions to the environmental protection.

Thank you!

Student Union

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

亮点说明：本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。条件句的省略：If so, we should bear the following in mind.时间状语从句的使用：we should turn off the lights and the taps when we don’t use them.倒装句的使用：Only in these ways can we make our schoolyard more beautiful.连接词也是本文的一大亮点：To begin with, Also, In addition, Last but not least。