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写作提示：目前，越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习，且学生呈低龄化趋势。请你就此现象发表自己的看法。

①不赞成这一做法。

②有些家长送孩子出国学习，认为这样可以接受良好的教育，能学好外语，将来赚更多的钱。其实不然。

③这种做法弊多利少。

④花钱太多，是在国内学习的10倍多。

⑤孩子小，在陌生环境中容易学坏。

⑥同时给人们一个启示：政府应采取措施建立各类学校以适应人们的教育需求。

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Study at Home Instead of Abroad 　　I don't think it's good to let children go abroad for further study. 　　However, some parents are in favor of the idea. They believe children can receive a better education－and learn a foreign language better. Also they can earn more money in the future. 　　As a matter of fact, there are more disadvantages than advantages. As we know, studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as studying in China. Besides, children are too young to take care of themselves. What's more, they might follow bad examples. 　　At the same time, measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people.

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点评：这是一篇议论文，作者能够按写作提示对事件简要评述，要点齐全，议论比较有条理性、有逻辑性，遣词造句均能达意，并能较好地使用一些较高级词汇和结构（如：What's more；meet the needs；measures should be taken by the government to set up…；they might follow bad examples等）。时态把握得比较到位。议论的这种现象是目前存在的，所以作者选用一般现在时。整体来看是一篇不错的文章。