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3．假如你是李华，上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣，希望你能教他几首中国古诗词，现在请你用英语给他回信，内容包括：
1．乐于帮助；
2．确定碰面相关事宜（如时间、地点等等）．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；．
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going on with you recently？
I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help．（高分句型一）As a matter of fact，it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you-my best friend．The following are my arrangements for it．
Firstly，let's fix a time when both of us are available．What about this Saturday afternoon？In addition，there is no doubt that RenminPark is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry，which is not far away my home nor yours．（高分句型二）If it is not convenient for you，please tell me to make necessary adjustments．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your instant reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息上周你的外教Peter给你来信说他开始对中国古诗词感兴趣，希望你能教他几首中国古诗词，现在请你用英语给他回信．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：乐于帮助；确定碰面相关事宜（如时间、地点等等）．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：go on with继续，进展；more than非常；As a matter of fact事实上；Firstly首先；In addition另外；Look forward to盼望；
I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help．（高分句型一）
In addition，there is no doubt that Renmin Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry，which is not far away my home nor yours．（高分句型二）
If it is not convenient for you，please tell me to make necessary adjustments．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      How is everything going on with you recently？I'm more than glad to receive your letter asking me for help．（高分句型一）As a matter of fact，it is a great honor for me to introduce some Chinese ancient poems to you-my best friend．The following are my arrangements for it．
      Firstly，let's fix a time when both of us are available．What about this Saturday afternoon？In addition，there is no doubt that Renmin Park is an excellent place to learn classical Chinese poetry，which is not far away my home nor yours．（高分句型二）If it is not convenient for you，please tell me to make necessary adjustments．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your instant reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．