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《中学生》英语杂志“热点”专栏2012年第2期的讨论话题为“中学生是否该做兼职”，你对该话题很感兴趣，并在班中进行了一次问卷调查。现在你写信向该栏目投稿，介绍本次问卷调查的大致结果。信中包括如下要点：

(1)你班中同学做兼职的情况：全班62个学生中有近三分之二的人曾经或正在从事餐馆服务员、商店店员或图书管理员等工作；

(2)这些同学选择做兼职的原因：约一半的学生是为了帮助解决贫困家庭孩子经济问题；另外一些人认为可以学以致用并丰富社会经验；

(3)其他同学不做兼职工作的主要原因：高三学习压力太大，没有时间；兼职工作报酬低，或是父母不允许。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．

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Yours sincerely,

Yang Li

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Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．Nearly two-thirds of my 62 classmates has ever done or are doing part-time jobs, working as shop assistants, waiters in fast food restaurants or librarians．About half of them take up part-time jobs to help solve financial problems for their families．Others give up their leisure time because the jobs provide them with good chances to enrich their social experience and put what they have learned in class into practice．The other students do not do part-time jobs because under great pressure, students of senior three can not afford the time for the jobs which are poorly paid．Besides, their parents wouldn’t allow them to do that． Yours sincerely, Yang Li