Question

15．第二节 书面表达
假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Dave想了解中国的传统节日"春节"，请你回复他的电子邮件，介绍"春节"及这个节日里的主要活动．
1．它是中国的传统节日之一；
2．家人团聚；
3．吃饺子、放焰火、走亲访友等其他活动．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总数．
参考词汇：
春节the Spring Festival     放焰火set off fireworks
Dear Dave，
In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．
Dear Dave，
In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country．
Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the celebration．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast．Children have great fun in setting off fireworks．Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．
Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it．Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇介绍春节的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一点明书信的主要内容；二春节的活动；三提出希望．
高分句型：
1．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast 句子里making dumplings and having a feast 做句子的伴随状语．make，have和主语all the family members 之间是主动关系．
在除夕夜，所有的家庭成员聚集在一起，包饺子，吃大餐．
2．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．句子里In addition to 表示"除此之外"；have a new tendency to 表示"有一个新的流行趋势"．
除了传统的活动，人们有了一个新的流行趋势，例如旅行，用微信发送祝愿．

解答 【答案】
Dear Dave，
   In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival．As is known to all，it has been enjoying great popularity in our country．（点明书信的主要内容）
   Usually，no matter how far away or how busy we are，we will try to come home for the celebration．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all the family members get together，making dumplings and having a feast．【高分句型一】Children have great fun in setting off fireworks．Parents take their kids to pay a visit to relatives or friends．In addition to these traditional activities，people have a new tendency to celebrate it such as travelling and sending best wishes through Wechat．【高分句型二】（春节的活动）
   Hopefully，you will come to China to experience it．Looking forward to your early reply．（提出希望）
                                                                             Yours sincerely，
                                                                              Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
虽然定语从句，名词性从句，非谓语动词是高中的语法重点，在作文里运用好了会提升作文的等级，但是如果平时都写不对这样的句子，那么在高考时如果强迫使用只能是画蛇添足，反倒不如用简单句．