Question

20．第一节 基础写作
上周班会课，你们班就"如何发展自己的情商"展开了热烈讨论，以下是讨论情况：

情商内容	认识和管理自身情绪； 自我激励； 认知他人情绪； 处理人际关系．
高情商特征	社交能力强，外向而愉快； 富于同情心； 对事情较投入．
情商发展方式	养成良好习惯，如乐观冷静； 积极参加各种活动； 三思而后行．

*参考词汇：情商：EQ （emotional quotient）
[写作内容]
根据以上情景，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：
1、讨论的时间、主题和范围；
2、情商的具体内容；
3、情商高的特征；
4、情商发展方式．
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容．
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
Last week in our class meeting，we had a heated discussion about how to develop our own emotional quotient．
As far as we can understand，EQ ranges from knowing and managing our own emotions，motivating ourselves，
understanding others'emotions to dealing with the relationship between people．（说明情商内容）【高分句型一】Those who have a high EQ
usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic
as well as handling problems devotedly．（说明情商特征）To develop a better EQ，we ought to form good habits like keeping calm
and optimistic．【高分句型二】Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we
should think twice before taking action．（说明培养情商的方式）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1．Those who have a high EQ usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic as well as handling
problems devotedly．
那些具有高情商的人拥有以下这些特征：比如社交能力强，外向而愉快，富于同情心还有做事情投入．
as well as，用作连词意为"和…一样好"之外，用作介词时意为"不但…而且，还有"的含义，后面通常接名词或动名词．
2．Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we should think twice before taking action．
此外，我们不仅应该积极参加各种活动，而且我们也应该三思而后行．
not only…but also，意为"不但…而且…"，主要用于连接两个对等的成分，【注意】若连接两个成分做主语，其后的谓语动词与靠近的主语保持一致．not only位于句首时，其后的句子需要使用倒装形式．

解答 Last week in our class meeting，we had a heated discussion about how to develop our own emotional quotient．
As far as we can understand，EQ ranges from knowing and managing our own emotions，motivating ourselves，
 understanding others'emotions to dealing with the relationship between people．（说明情商内容）【高分句型一】Those who have a high EQ
usually possess such features as having excellent interpersonal skills，being outgoing，pleasant and sympathetic
 as well as handling problems devotedly．（说明情商特征）To develop a better EQ，we ought to form good habits like keeping calm
 and optimistic．【高分句型二】Furthermore，not only are we supposed to take an active part in various activities but also we
should think twice before taking action．（说明培养情商的方式）

点评 考生在写作时，注意使用人称代词，思路清晰，句式灵活，用词精准，句意表达完整．