Question

10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Yesterday morning，I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital．The other day when he was going to cross a street，he was such careful that he didn't go until he saw the traffic light to turn green．But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come towards them．It was too late for Allee to escape．He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away．He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation．When I went to see him，he was out of dangers but still looked pale．I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述作者的朋友Allee出意外的事情．Allee一向小心，每次都要等绿灯才过马路，但是那天他在过马路时却被突然出现的车撞了，意外发生后他立刻被送到附近的医院．当作者去探望他的时候，他虽然脱离了危险但是面色仍然苍白．

解答 Yesterday morning，I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital．The other day when he was going to cross a street，he was such careful that he didn't go until he saw the traffic light to turn green．But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come towards them．It was too late for Allee to escape．He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away．He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had∧operation．When I went to see him，he was out of dangers but still looked pale．I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible．
详解：
1．surprising改为surprised 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
2．has改为had 考查动词时态．在宾语从句中，主句用过去时态，从句应该也用过去时的某种形式，此处用过去完成时．
3．such改为so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
4．删掉to 考查动词不定式．感官动词see后应省略to，see sb．do sth．意为"看见某人做某事"，强调看到某人做事的全过程．
5．while改为when 考查固定搭配．hardly…when …意为"一…就…"，是固定搭配．
6．them改为him 考查代词．him指代Allee．
7．or改为and 考查连词．前后两个单句表示并列关系，而非转折关系，用连词and．
8．operation前加an 考查冠词．have an operation意为"做手术"．
9．dangers改为danger 考查固定搭配．out of danger意为"脱离危险"，是固定搭配．
10．sincere改为sincerely 考查副词．hope是动词，用副词修饰．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．