Question

1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
     2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
   Last summer vacation，my parents and I go to the countryside to visit my uncle．It took us three hour to get there by car．After having lunch on my uncle's，we went fishing in the river near her house．I was very exciting because I caught a lot of fish there．The next day，we decided to ride bikes around village．The village was very beautiful but we were very relaxed．Then we had a picnic in a park that many children were flying kites．The country life was very peacefully．I hope that I can go to there again next year．

Answer 1

分析 本文作者主要介绍了去年暑假，自己与父母一起到乡下的叔叔家里度假的情况．

解答 Last summer vacation，my parents and I goto the countryside to visit my uncle．
It took us three hour to get there by car．After having lunchonmy uncle's，we
went fishing in the river near her house．I was very exciting because I caught a lot
of fish there．The next day，we decided to ride bikes around∧village．The village
was very beautiful butwe were very relaxed．Then we had a picnic in a parkthat
many children were flying kites．The country life was very peacefully．I hope that
I can goto there again next year．
详解：
1．go改为went    考查时态    根据时间状语"Last summer vacation"可知，此处指的是发生在去年暑假的事情，应使用一般过去时，故用went．
2．hour改为hours   考查名词的单复数   此处指的是三个小时，由于hour是可数名词，故用hours．
3．on改为at   考查固定搭配   at one's （home/house）意为：在某人的家里，此处指的是在我叔叔家里；故用at．
4．her改为his  考查人称代词的一致性    此处用来修饰名词house，指的是作者叔叔的家，故用his．
5．exciting改为excited  考查过去分词  此处用在系动词was之后作表语，说明的是主语I（指人）的心情，故用由过去分词转化来的形容词excited．
6．village前加the   考查定冠词   此处用来修饰名词village，表示特指作者叔叔所在的村庄，故在village前加the．  
7．but改为and  考查句意理解以及连词   本句的意思是：村子很漂亮，我们很放松；此处表示并列关系而不是转折关系，故用连词and．
8．that改为where   考查关系副词   本句为定语从句；先行词是a park，由于该从句中缺少地点状语"in a park"，故用关系副词where．
9．peacefully改为peaceful  考查形容词   此处用在系动词was之后作表语，故用形容词peaceful．
10．去掉 to    考查介词   由于there是副词，所以它的前面不能用介词，故去掉go之后的to．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．