Question

第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．

Growing up to Be Independent

Growing up is not always easy. When facing difficulties, courage and a spirit of independence can be morn useful than crying for help. That's what Hong Zhanhui's story of growing from boy to man with family hardships tells us.

Hong who was born 1982 in a poor family in Xinhua County, Henan Province is now a hero in people's mind. When he was only 11, his father became mentally ill and one day came back with an abandoned baby girl. A year later, Hong's mother and younger brother both left home because of poverty and pressure from his sick father. Their burdens fell onto the 12-year-old's shoulders: to treat his father's illness, bring up the adopted sister Chenchen, and to go on to study.Hong didn't give up. Since a young age, he has worked in part-time jobs to feed his family. At the same time, he has studied at college. To take care of Chenchen, he worked hard to rent a room

near his campus for her, and send her to school. After Hong's story went public, people were moved to tears by his unselfishness. Hard as his life sas, Hong didn't abandon his father and the adopted sister, because they needed his help. With his hard-won money, he even aided other students struggling against misfortunes.

Hong's story shows that with love and willpower, no hardship can defeat a person but himself.So when facing difficulties, don't complain about bad luck. Consider what morn you could do for your family and society and you'll find the world smiling back.

假设你是一名读者，你读到了以上关于洪战辉的报道后，你想写信与他交朋友，在鼓励他的同时和他分享你自己的成长经历。

在信的开头介绍你读到的关于他的报道，以约30年词概括以上文章的内容要点。

以约120个词就“成长和独立”为主题，写一篇感想。并包括以下要点。

1．你读完这篇报道后有什么感想？你认为独立精神对青少年成长的作用是什么？

2．请记叙在你自己成长过程中就独立精神的培养的真实或虚构的一次经历.

写作要求

1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Hong,                                            

Recently I have read your story in the newspaper that you who was a poor student grow up to be independent. You manage to study well as well as take care of your sick father and adopted sister by working in spare time.

I'm quite moved by your story.I think we teenagers could learn a lot from you. You're independent, hard-working, persevering, kind and optimistic and you live a hard but meaningful life. It's known to all that a spirit of independence can have a good effect on adolescents. It helps push us to learn more and lead us not to give way to difficulties.

Learning to be independent is beneficial to us. I want to share my story with you. Little child as I was 10 years ago, I was independent so that I went to school on my own. One heavy raining afternoon, I was on my way home alone though it rained cats and dogs. Despite the rain, I walked so carefully that I wouldn't fall to the ground. At last, I went home safe. My parents were anxious waiting for me at home and they felt so proud of me. After reading your story, I really want to make friends with you. I hope we can meet someday.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】略