Question

目前，我国中学生的健康水平严重下降，引起了父母、学校和专家的忧虑。为解决这一问题，有人提出将体育纳入高考。结合实际，谈谈你的看法：

    1．是否赞成体育纳入高考及原因；

    2．简述健康与学习的关系；

    3．你认为学校应该做什么来提高学生身体素质。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

    3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

    4．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

  Chinese students' health has been getting worse these years, and some people believe putting PE into the College Entrance Examination might be a way out.

  In my opinion，____________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Chinese students’ health has been getting worse these years, and some people believe putting PE into the College Entrance Examination might be a way out.

   In my opinion, it is essential to put PE into the College Entrance Examination because it can not only provide our students with a stronger body but also develop the strength of our spirits. In other words, I can’t agree more. As we know, more and more pressure of study we have to face now so that a strong body is of vital importance to help us shoulder the pressure. Moreover, if we got ill, more time will be taken for us to recover and our study progress will be influenced.

    As far as I’m concerned, schools have the responsibility to require students to exercise one hour ever day at least. Meanwhile ,schools are supposed to hold more outdoor activities in order to make sure that each student  is in good health.

In a word, more and more attention should be paid to students’ health

【解析】

试题解析：从文章体裁分析，本文是一篇记叙文的写作，针对我国中学生的健康水平严重下降，引起了父母、学校和专家的忧虑。为解决这一问题，有人提出将体育纳入高考。结合实际，谈谈你的看法：包括以下几个方面：1．是否赞成体育纳入高考及原因； 2．简述健康与学习的关系； 3．你认为学校应该做什么来提高学生身体素质。

【亮点说明】

文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色，如it is essential to put PE into the College Entrance Examination用到了高级词汇essential必要的，固定句型：It is + adj + to do sth,it 做形式主语，代to do sth; because it can not only provide our students with a stronger body but also develop the strength of our spirits（not only…but also…（不但  而且）As we know, more and more pressure of study we have to face now so that a strong body is of vital importance to help us shoulder the pressure.，（As引导非限制性定语从句，so that 引导目的状语从句），I can’t agree mor（我再同意不过了）并且主语了句子的衔接如：In my opinion在我看来, In other words,换句话说 Moreover而且，加之， As far as I’m concerned据我看来，Meanwhile在此期间，同时等。

考点：提纲作文写作。