Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的好友John热爱绘画，从小梦想成为—名画家。但他的家人极力反对，他有些犹豫不决，于是写信向你征求建议。请你给他写一封英文回信，要点如下：

1.支持他的梦想；

2.原因（比如：要坚守梦想，画家不一定没有好的收入，绘画是一种高尚的事业等）；

3.盼望回复。

注意: 1.词数100左右；2.信的格式和开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family's objections.________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family’s objections. As far as I am concerned, you should stick to your dream and try to become an artist.

For one thing, it has been your dream since you were a child. For another, being an artist doesn’t necessarily mean that you can’t have a stable job or high salary to support yourself. On the contrary, if you try your best, you will be a success artist all over the world. In addition, being an artist is something great, as artists are like bridges that connect human and nature.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】
这是一篇建议类的应用文，文章要点已给出，在写作时应注意以下几点：

通篇应以一般现在时时态为主。

要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。

注意语气。由于该作文是对朋友提出建议，所以用语应该恳切，要采取充分的例子对观点进行支撑，要多用积极性、鼓励性的词汇，以达到本文写作目的。

范文亮点：

范文采取了(as far as my concerned…)，(for one thing…for another…)等固定搭配。

文中使用了(stick to do sth.),（on the contrary）,(all over the world),(in addition),(look forward to doing )等高分短语。