Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处错

误,每句中最多有2处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(︿),并在其下面写上该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.

       2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不算分.

Mrs. Black was having a lot of trouble with her skin, so she went to see her doctor and had some test. The next day her doctor telephoned her to give her the list of things she should not eat. Mrs. Black careful wrote all the things down a piece of paper, and then she left it beside the telephone when she went out to a friends meeting. When she got back home two hours late, she found her husband waiting for her. Carried a big basket full of food, she said, “Hello, dear. I've done all your shopping for you.” “Done all my shopping？” she asked in surprise, “but why did you know what I wanted？”“Well, when I got home, I found your shopping list beside the telephone，” answered her husband. “So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down.”

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 test → tests

 the → a

 careful→ carefully

 a 前加on

 friend→ friend’s

  late → later

  carried → carrying 

 she → he

 why → how

 have → had。

【解析】

试题分析：Black太太的皮肤有很大的麻烦，所以她找医生，做一些检查。第二天医生给她列了一张食物禁忌清单。夫人很认真地记在一张纸上放在电话旁边去见朋友了。当她两个小时回家时，发现她丈夫买下了她记录下来的所有禁忌物品。 因为他把食物禁忌清单误以为是购物清单了。

 做一些检查。test 是可数名词，前面有some，所以用复数形式tests。

 a list of things是一张清单。不是特指不用the。

 wrote是动词要用副词修饰，所以把形容词careful改为 carefully。

 on a piece of paper是在一张纸上。

 she went out to a friend’s meeting她去和一个朋友的见面。单数可数名词所有格是：名词+’s。

 应该是两小时后：two hours later，late是完的意思。

 carried表被动，carrying表主动，伴随。

 她丈夫应该是男士，所以把she 变成 he。

 根据前后文可知，妻子问丈夫是如何知道要买什么。用how问方式，用what问什么。

 So I went down to the shop and bought everything you have written down. 所以我去商店买了你写下来的所有的东西"。write动作在过去式went和bought之前，所以用过去完成时，把have 变成 had。

考点：短文改错。