Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校交流生John对中国文化很感兴趣。近期你校将面向外国交流生开设中国书法课，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 课程的开设目的；

2. 教师简介；

3. 报名时间、地点和方式。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中国书法Chinese calligraphy；交换生exchange students

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

Knowing you’re crazy about Chinese culture, I’m writing to inform you that a Chinese calligraphy course is to be offered specially to exchange students in our school.

The course is aimed at helping foreign students appreciate the beauty of Chinese calligraphy which is a significant part of Chinese culture. Getting to know Chinese calligraphy is very helpful for you in understanding Chinese culture better. The teacher has a good knowledge of calligraphy. Besides, with a high level of fluency in English, he has no trouble communicating with foreigners.

If you’re interested, please sign up at the Students’ Union or on the school website before July 15.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。你校交流生John对中国文化很感兴趣。近期你校将面向外国交流生开设中国书法课，请你给他写封邮件介绍相关情况。

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