Question

A little girl who lived in a simple and poor house on a hill. Usually she might play in the small garden. She could see over the garden fence and across the valley the wonderful house with shining golden window high on another hill. Since she loved her parents and her family, she desired to live in such a house and dream all day about how wonderful and excited it must feel to live there. At the age when she gained some basic skill, she begged her mother to a bike ride outside the garden. Her mother finally allowed her to go. Down the hill and cross the valley, the girl rode to the gate of the golden house. As she got︿ her bike and put it against the gate post, she focused on the house. She was disappointed when she found all the windows were rather dirty.

Answer 1

【小题1】去掉who
【小题2】might—would
【小题3】the--a
【小题4】window--windows
【小题5】since—though/although/while
【小题6】dream--dreamed
【小题7】excited--exciting
【小题8】to--for
【小题9】cross--across
【小题10】加off

解析试题分析：文章讲述了一个小女孩儿生活在很贫穷的房子里，每天都在院子里玩耍，她看到了山对面一个漂亮的房子，尽管她很热爱她的父母，但她还是希望能住在这样一个房子里，等到她长大的时候，她向父母要了一辆自行车，骑过去之后才知道所有的窗户都很脏。
【小题1】去掉who 句子结构的考查。此处是一完整的句子，不缺少定语从句who是多余的。
【小题2】might—would 情态动词的用法。might表示对事情的推测，此处表示她会在小院子里玩耍。故应为would.表示意愿。
【小题3】the—a 冠词的用法。泛指一栋漂亮的房子。
【小题4】window—windows 名词单复数的考查。此处应是多个窗户，故应为复数形式。
【小题5】since—though/although/while 连词的考查。此处表示虽然，尽管的意思，而since表示既然。
句意为：虽然她爱她的父母她的家人，但她还是想住在这样一个房子里。
【小题6】dream—dreamed 时态的考查。与前面的desired是并列的故应用一般过去时。
【小题7】excited—exciting 分词的用法。居住在那儿感觉一定很美妙令人兴奋。真正主语为to live there修饰这一动词不定式应用现在分词形式，故应改为exciting.
【小题8】to—for 介词的用法。beg sb for sth祈求某人要什么东西，祈求她的妈妈给她一辆自行车。
【小题9】cross—across 介词的用法。此处后面为名词，所以这里应为介词，表示“度过，通过”的意思。
cross 为动词；across为介词。
【小题10】加off 此处表示从自行车上下来，所以要加off.
考点:考查短文改错。