Question

假如你叫李华,给你的美国笔友Tom写一封100词左右的信,谈谈你去狮子山

旅游的事情。内容要点如下:

1. 前不久和三个朋友游览狮子山；

2. 山顶有庙,稍南有元代著名学者之墓,墓碑上的字难以辨认；

3. 山坡上有很多松树,据说其中的两棵松树有500多年的历史；

4. 傍晚下山回家,大脑中留下了美好的回忆。

注意:1. 参考词汇:  Mount Lion狮子山；scholar学者；tomb-stone墓碑；

2. 首尾句已经给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

     I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my visit to Mount Lion.

__________________________________________________________________

 

I really hope that one day you can visit Mount Lion with us.

       Best wishes！

  Yours,LiHua.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

     I was so pleased to hear from you. Now I am writing to tell you something about my visit to Mount Lion.

     The other day I visited Mount Lion with three of my friends. When we got to the top at noon, we were tired, but the scenery there was so beautiful that we forgot our tiredness. On the top of the hill stands a temple, a little south of which lies the tomb of a famous scholar of Yuan Dynasty. We could hardly read the characters on the tombstone. There were many pine trees on the hill. It is said that two of them are over five hundred years old. It was late in the afternoon that we set off for home with a beautiful memory in our mind.

     I really hope that one day you can visit Mount Lion with us.

     Best wishes!

Yours,LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作。向笔友叙述旅游狮子山的经历，文章的要点都给了出来，考生需要以时间为顺序把要点翻译成英语。在写作的时候注意使用高级的句式，不要总是使用单调的陈述句，可以变化使用倒装句，省略句等多种形式来表示。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：提纲类的短文写作是考生一直在训练的文章类型。本文在审题时要注意是过去时，要一时间为顺序来组织全文，不要遗漏文章的要点。在写作的时候注意选择高级的词汇来提升文章的层次。