假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I was a small child，my parents didn't have many money and I had very few Christmas gifts．My cousin was ten and he had gone out singing Christmas songs and made quite a bit money．Without tell anyone he went to the shop and spent almost every penny of his money in a teddy bear．Then he was used the change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming （迷人的） heart on them．He came to my house and told my parents what he had bought these things for me as Christmas gift．Twenty-five years later the teddy bear has been thrown away，but I even have the little necklace in my jewelry box to remind me of my cousin kindness．

分析本文讲述了作者小时候家里很穷，父母没有钱给她买圣诞礼物，表哥出去唱圣诞歌挣钱给她买了一个Teddy熊和一个项链作礼物．25年过去了，Teddy熊已经扔掉了，但是项链依然在作者的首饰盒里，提醒作者记得表哥的好意．

解答 When I was a small child，my parents didn't have manymoney and I had very few Christmas gifts．My cousin was ten and he had gone out singing Christmas songs and made quite a bit∧money．Without tell anyone he went to the shop and spent almost every penny of his money in a teddy bear．Then he was used the change to buy a little necklace with a glass charming （迷人的） heart on them．He came to my house and told my parents whathe had bought these things for me as Christmas gift．Twenty-five years later the teddy bear has been thrown away，but I even have the little necklace in my jewelry box to remind me of my cousin kindness．
详解：
1．many改为much；考查近义词辨析，many修饰可数名词复数形式，much修饰不可数名词，文中money不可数，故用much．
2．bit后面加of；考查介词，后面有名词money作宾语，故前面要加上介词of．
3．tell改为telling；考查非谓语动词，介词without后面要跟动名词形式．
4．in改为on；考查介词，spend time/money on athon sth是固定搭配，意为"在…上花费时间（金钱）"．
5．去掉was；考查动词的语态，主语he与动词used是主谓关系，要用主动语态，故把was去掉．
6．them改为it；考查代词，此处代词指代a little necklace，故用it．
7．what 改为that；考查名词性从句，这是一个宾语从句，从句中不缺少句子成分，故用that连接宾语从句．
8．gift改为gifts；考查名词单复数，此处gift指前面的things，故用复数形式．
9．even改为still；考查副词，even意为"甚至"，still意为"仍旧"，分析句意为"但我的首饰盒里仍旧有一个小小的项链"，故用still．
10．cousin改为cousin's；考查名词所有格，分析句意为"我表哥的好意"，故用名词所有格形式做kindness的定语．

点评短文改错时要注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致．各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用．这类题型一般考查的是基础知识，平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及习惯常用结构．

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