Question

【题目】请改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first learnt to write with English, I ran into many difficulties. The mainly problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into English. A teacher advised me keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it a lot and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】1.with-in

2.mainly-main

3. but-and

4. advised me 后加to

5. 去掉 should

6. talk—talking

7. me-myself

8. showed 后加it

9. reads—read

10. word - words

【解析】１.句意：用英语写。ｉｎ　Ｅｎｇｌｉｓｈ用英语，故把ｗｉｔｈ―――ｉｎ。

２.形容词修饰名词，故把mainly-main。

３.句意：我总是用汉语想并努力把他们翻译成英语。根据句意可知此处是递进关系，故把but-and。

４.固定搭配：ａｄｖｉｓｅ　ｓｂ．　ｔｏ　ｄｏ　ｓｔｈ．建议某人做某事，故在advised me 后加to 。

５.此处是并列的两个表示过去的动作，should是赘语，应去掉。

６.固定搭配：enjoy doing。故把talk—talking 。

７. 汉语“自己表达”用英语是express oneself。故把me-myself 。

８. “给某人看……”应用show sth to sb。代词it 放在showed和to 中间。故showed 后加it 。

９. 该文以过去时态为背景，所以reads应改为read。

１０．不是一个人说，所以word应用复数。