Question

仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。

情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居住的Brown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。

参考词汇：have a gathering party(聚会)

这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇图画作文，要求根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。写图画作文首先要仔细审图，获取主要信息，确定写作要点。根据所给图画内容以及所给提示信息可知本文是告诉Brown女士参加聚会的路线，属于说明文范畴。而且获取的信息是Brown应该从学校出发，目的地是中心公园（the Central Park）.。在写作时要根据图画信息，灵活使用指路的表达语，指明如何到达中心公园。此外，说明文还要注意语言的简练，应该多使用简单句，避免使用复杂的句式，而且文章应使用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本篇范文语言简洁明了，清楚详细地指明了路线，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者首先表达了自己听到她能参加聚会的高兴和感激。然后告诉Brwon 女士聚会的地点和具体的路线。在文中，作者使用了多种简单句式，比如祈使句，Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.感叹句What a funny thing!还有并列句Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.等。而且反义问句Maybe you've been there, haven't you?的出现增强了文章语言的感染力和亲和力。

考点：考查图画作文