Question

假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给Jack写封推荐信。

1. 欢迎Jack的到来；

2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；

3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；

4. 刘佳的特点与特长（活泼、乐观；电脑技能；沟通能力；英语水平等）。

注意：词数：120~150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack,

I’m Li Ming, Chairman of the students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.

I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.

If you have any questions about it, please contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

                                                Yours，

                                                Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求根据所给提示给Jack写封推荐信，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：look forward to盼望，have a gift for有…天赋， It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.这句话用了it做形式主语， She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. 这句话用了定语从句，还有文章还使用了What’s more, 这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查书信类书面表达