Question

你叫李华，是一名高中生。你校积极响应教育部开展“阳光体育活动”的号召，组织学生在大课间进行长跑活动。但是，同学们对此持有不同的观点。

正方	反方
1.放松身体，增强体质 2.缓解学习压力	1.跑步后，容易疲劳，影响上课 2.出汗多，可能导致感冒

请根据以上表格的内容给某英语报纸的编辑写一封信，介绍同学们的不同观点，并谈谈你对课间长跑的看法。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
To respond to Sunshine Sports Activities launched by the Ministry of Education, our school has organized long-distance running during the long break.
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor
To respond to Sunshine Sports Activities launched by the Ministry of Education, our school has organized long-distance running during the long break. However，we students have different opinions about it.
Many of the students are in favor of this program. They think running is a good way to build them up. Besides, it can help them to relax and relieve the pressures of study.
However, other students think differently. They claim that they feel very tired after running, so they have difficulty concentrating on their lessons. In addition, they sweat so heavily after running that it is easy to catch a cold.
I think it’s beneficial for students to take regular physical exercise because they spend most of their time sitting in the classroom. Long-distance running is an effective way to keep fit. However, other ways of exercising should be provided for students, too.
Do you agree with me?
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：本篇写作题材是同学们“阳光体育活动”持有不同的观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】Many of the students are in favor of this program. 这句话用了in favor of支持，They think running is a good way to build them up. 这句话用了动名词做主语，
They claim that they feel very tired after running, so they have difficulty concentrating on their lessons.这句话有宾语从句，结果状语从句， they sweat so heavily after running that it is easy to catch a cold.这句话用了so…that…句型， I think it’s beneficial for students to take regular physical exercise because they spend most of their time sitting in the classroom.这句话用了it做形式主语，还有范文还使用了Besides, However, In addition,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。