Question

假如你叫李华, 是一位高一学生。最近你发现一些同学在教室使用手机，影响学习。请用英语给校长写封信，反映这些同学在教室使用手机的情况，并提出两条建议。
要点提示：
1、在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声；
2、有的同学还在课堂上发短信息。
注意：1、要求作适当发挥，使信的内容充实、语言连贯流畅；
2、词数：120
3、开头已给出
4、参考词汇：手机的铃声the ringing of mobile phones   短信short messages
Dear principal,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and…
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Answer 1

Dear principal,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ringing of mobile phones, which has a bad effect on our study. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to study, so quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.
To keep the classroom quiet, I suggest our school make the following rules about the use of mobile phones in the classroom. First, those with mobile phones should turn them off in class. Second, they should not talk on the phone or send short messages in the classroom. I think, if anyone breaks the rules, proper ways should be thought of to punish him or her.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,  Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
点评：建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。