Question

假设你叫王华，你的一位英国朋友Jack从英国给你寄来一件印有哈利·波特（Harry Potter）形象的T恤衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你的近况。请你给他写一封回信表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容：
1. 感谢他送你的礼物。你非常喜欢，因为哈利·波特是你最喜欢的电影主角。
2. 告诉他你在新的学校一切都好，只是这里的英语老师课堂上英语说的很多，你很难听懂老师说的每一个单词。
3. 因为他是姚明的球迷，你将为他寄去一件印有姚明形象的T恤衫。
4. 询问他的近况，并希望他能来中国。
注意：1. 书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 词数100个词左右。
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you again.                                 
                                                                            
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you again. Thank you for the T-shirt with Harry Potter on it and I like it very much. As you know, Harry Potter is my favourite film hero. Every time I wear it, I will think of you.
I’m fine here in the new school and everything goes well. The only problem is that my English teacher speaks more English and I find it hard to follow her.
In return for your gift, I will send you a T-shirt with Yao Ming on it because I know you are a fan of him.
How are you doing in England? And I hope you can pay a visit to China some day.
I’m looking forward to your reply.

解析试题分析：
这是封感谢信。 其常用的格式如下：
Dear ______ ,
①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感谢的原因）. ②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（对方给予的具体帮助）, I fear that I would have been ______（没有对方帮助时的后果）.
　　③Every one agrees that it was you who ______（给出细节）.
　　④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                  Yours sincerely,
　                                       ⅹⅹⅹ
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua
在写信件之类的应用文的时候，除了注意文章的格式之外，还要注意不要遗漏文章的要点，因为要点也是阅卷老师特别关注的地方。同样也要注意使用合适的连接词让各要点成为一个整体，注意使用高级的词汇如：look forward to…,in return for…等。
考点：考查提纲作文
点评：提纲作文的关键是不要遗漏文章的要点，要注意格式，在写作的时候为提示档次要使用连接词和高级词汇。