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3．共享单车（sharing bikes）的出现，为大家带来了方便．同时，也反映出一些问题．例如，随意停放，影响行人通行；故意破坏车辆，造成维护成本增加，并影响他人正常使用，等等．请针对此现象，写一封倡议书，号召大家文明用车．
要点提示：
1、共享单车的好处；
2、使用过程中出规的问题；
3、如何做到文明用车．
写作要求：
1、文章要涵盖上述要点，并适当增加细节．
2、字数：不少于100字．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息共享单车（sharing bikes）的出现，为大家带来了方便．同时，也反映出一些问题．例如，随意停放，影响行人通行；故意破坏车辆，造成维护成本增加，并影响他人正常使用，等等．请针对此现象，写一封倡议书，号召大家文明用车，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：共享单车的好处；使用过程中出规的问题；如何做到文明用车． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Presently目前；A large number of许多，大量；Moreover而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Lastly最后；To conclude总之；
A large number of sharing bikes can be found and rented at a low price．（高分句型一）
However，along with its rapid development，sharingbikes also bring some problems，including random parking，vandalism and possession of sharing bikes，etc．（高分句型二）
With effective and efficient measures taken，and efforts made by those involved，it can be expected that sharing bikes will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public transportation．（高分句型三）

解答 My Views on Sharing bikes 　　     Presently，in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou，sharing bikes have become increasingly popular．A large number of sharing bikes can be found and rented at a low price．（高分句型一）Moreover，you can park the bike almost anywhere you like．Urban transportation has thus been made much more convenient and even revolutionized．However，along with its rapid development，sharing bikes also bring some problems，including random parking，vandalism and possession of sharing bikes，etc．（高分句型二）To solve these problems，there are some measures for the authorities to take．Firstly，the government could implement more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of sharing bikes．Secondly，the public should raise their awareness of using sharing bikes reasonably．Lastly，urban transportation system should be upgraded and improved to accommodate automobiles，bikes and pedestrians．
         To conclude，a sensible attitude should be held toward sharing bikes．With effective and efficient measures taken，and efforts made by those involved，it can be expected that sharing bikes will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public transportation．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．