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10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
In New York there are some neighborhoods are full of people from same country．For example，in the southern part of the city has New York's Chinatown．New Yorkers from all part of the city like to go here．They enjoy shopping at the Chinese stores and eat at the Chinese restaurants．But most of the people live in Chinatown are Chinese．The shop signs are all writing in Chinese．Everyone in the shops speak Chinese．This is one of the crowding and colorful neighborhoods in the city．

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分析 本文介绍了纽约唐人街的情况，唐人街的位置，他们的生活起居购物等情况．

解答 In New York there are some neighborhoodsare full of people from∧same country．For example，in the southern part of the city has New York's Chinatown．New Yorkers from all part of the city like to gohere．They enjoy shopping at the Chinese stores and eat at the Chinese restaurants．But most of the people live in Chinatown are Chinese．The shop signs are all writing in Chinese．Everyone in the shops speak Chinese．This is one of the crowding and colorful neighborhoods in the city．
1．去掉are 考查固定句型．本句是一个there be 结构的句子，在后文neighborhoods are full of people from same country这里的are是多余的，full of 在句中做定语修饰neighborhoods．
2．same前面加the 考查固定搭配．the same 是英语中的固定搭配，the是冠词，此处为特指．
3．has改成is 考查倒装．本句的主语是New York's Chinatown，谓语动词用单数．句意：中国的唐人街在纽约南部．
4．part改为parts 考查名词的数．part 是可数名词"部分"前面用all修饰，所以应该用复数形式．
5．here改为there 考查副词．根据句意：在纽约其他地方的人都喜欢去那里．所以用there．
6．eat改为eating 考查非谓语．enjoy的并列宾语是shopping和eating，所以用动名词做宾语．
7．live改为living 考查非谓语．此处用填的是定语living是现在分词在句中做定语修饰people，people与live之间是主谓关系．
8．writing改为written  考查被动．The shop signs 与write之间是被动关系，应该用被动语态，所以填written．
9．speak改为speaks 考查主谓一致．Everyone做主语谓语动词用单数，因为文章叙述用的是一般现在时，所以speaks．
10．crowding 改为crowded 考查形容词．此处要填写定语crowded是形容词"拥挤的"．

点评 短文改错首先要通读全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式结构，弄清句子间的结构关系，然后运用所掌握的语法，词汇等基本知识找出错误加以改正．