Question

下面短文中有10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个的单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
例如：
I remember how I used to playing outside with my friends during my childhood. We always had a great fun. We played many games in them we had to use our imagination. Playing those games, we learned how to compete, organize groups and be creating. We made up of many games that didn't have to be played with specific toys. Now, the situation is differently. Children are still playing, and instead of playing outdoors, they are playing indoors with high-tech toys. This mean they are staying inside the house all the times, and usually in front of a TV. So they are becoming more lonely and making less friends.

Answer 1

【小题1】playing改成play
【小题2】去掉great前面的a
【小题3】them改成which
【小题4】creating改成creative
【小题5】去掉up后面的of
【小题6】 differently改成different
【小题7】and改成but
【小题8】mean改成means
【小题9】times改成time
【小题10】less改成fewer

解析试题分析：作者回忆自己小时候是怎么和朋友在外面玩有趣的游戏，而现在的孩子都是呆在室内玩高科技玩具，这样做有很多弊端。
【小题1】我记得童年是怎么和朋友在外面玩的。Used to do过去常常做…：playing改成play
【小题2】我们总是玩得很愉快。Fun是不可数名词：去掉great前面的a
【小题3】我们玩了很多游戏，其中需要使用想象力。这里是定语从句，先行词是games，介词in后面用关系代词：them改成which
【小题4】玩这些游戏，我们学会了怎么竞争，组织团队和有创造力。Be+形容词，creating改成creative
【小题5】我们编造了很多不需要玩具的游戏。Make up编造，去掉up后面的of
【小题6】现在情况不同了。这里用形容词做表语：differently改成different
【小题7】孩子们孩子玩，但是不是在户外。这两句话是转折关系：and改成but
【小题8】这意味着他们整天都呆在房间里。主语是this，谓语用单数：mean改成means
【小题9】all the time一直：times改成time
【小题10】现在他们变得更孤独，交更少的朋友。friends 是可数名词，不能用less修饰，改成fewer
考点：考查短文改错